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The Lost Souls

A young girl sits at her desk
She is lost in a dream
She thinks back to younger days
When she was so happy
Before the tears started to flow
Life moved on
And everyone left the school
They went to college and university
They formed relationships and married
They found interesting jobs and brought up their children
A tear falls down her face
She is sad and distressed
There is nobody left in the school
She sits alone
She did not make it to adulthood
The pain she suffered led to her death
The torment and the teasing drove her to take her life
But she was not accepted into heaven
She will have to wait for all the others to die
There is a time and place for all of us
Her ghost roams the corridors and classrooms
Waiting for her time to join her classmates in heaven
Remember the lost souls and pray for them
:icondemonrobber:
A poem about the loss of innocence and how hard it can be to conform. Sometimes we don't all make it to adulthood. These are known as the Lost Souls.
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!RealityPsychosis Aug 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
This is really beautiful but so sad.
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:icondemonrobber:
That is a good combination both beautiful and sad. I think it sums up the poem perfectly. Thanks.
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:iconrealitypsychosis:
!RealityPsychosis Aug 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I think it's a good combination too!
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~Soulic May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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~EchelonxAnna May 22, 2012  Student General Artist
This is really amazing
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:icondemonrobber:
Thanks for the positive feedback.
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~The666thDracula May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
jeez i'm just like this... but my life has been better ever sense i started dating my lovely girlfriend~
this is Amazing~ <3
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:icondemonrobber:
Thanks for the positive response.
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~The666thDracula May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're verry welcome~ <3
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